1. I’m a-feared that the main character might be too much like the last protagonist. There are key differences, though. New guy is more neurotic, less polished socially, and writes in first person past.
2. Haven’t worked out the ending yet, which terrifies me.
3. I am still tweaking the gender politics of the thing. While The Mosquito Song fails the Bechdel test, I feel as though the majority of the characters are women. Also, the female characters tend to be more interesting and useful than their male counterparts. In Werewolf, I feel like the only capable women are in villainous (villainess) roles, and I am concerned about the interpretation of that thing. If I don’t remedy this problem I might have to re-write Involution, my every main character is a woman script.