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Intense Developmental EditingWith this service, Kennedy does a close reading of the manuscript, and provides thorough comments on each page regarding character motivations, dialogue, tone, and flow. Additional notes are provided for continuity errors, set-up and pay-off, possible similarities to other works of fiction, and things that might "turn off" your audience.
Included in this package are Kennedy's "meta-notes" wherein he suggests possible titles, sequence changes, which sub-plots are needed and which can be ejected, and other such larger changes to the story itself. Prices start at $65/ 5000 words Contact [email protected] |
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